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v0.95 Author Review Master
The Last Refrain
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Read Like A Reader
Please tell me where the existing story confused you, lost you, convinced you, or affected you. I am not asking you to rewrite the story into your preferred version.
- Where did your attention weaken?
- Which chapter or section was strongest?
- Which chapter or section was weakest?
- Where did story logic, setting, or character motivation become confusing?
- Did the ending work?
- Did you find typos, missing words, or formatting problems?
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Whenever possible, include the chapter number and a few opening words from the passage. Screenshots are welcome for formatting issues.
Use the web survey for general feedback. Use the downloadable form if you want to write notes offline first.
Version Tracking
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v0.95 Author Review Master
Status
author review and external test-reader feedback before v1.0.
Next Step
Review feedback, classify notes, and revise toward final release.
Deadline
To be announced.