Caveman’s Entertainment — First Book
A Tale of the Nameless City
A desert expedition, an ancient city, and a buried presence beneath the sand.
For Test Readers
First book from Caveman’s Entertainment. The older online reading copy is replaced by the current controlled test-reader edition.
Focus on confusion, pacing, character reactions, ending impact, typos, and formatting problems.
Go to test reader hubFeedback Goal
Notes are most useful when they include a chapter number, a short description of the issue, and whether the problem is story, character, pacing, clarity, typo, or formatting.
Readers are not being asked to rewrite the book. The goal is to find what works and what still needs attention before v1.0 or the final frozen master.
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