Caveman’s Entertainment — Test Reader Edition
Beneath His Gaze
A post-collapse Lovecraftian signal-horror novel following the Cult of Cthulhu album sequence.
For Test Readers
This is a controlled test-reader edition. It is ready for selected readers, but it is not the final publication master.
Focus on where the story is confusing, slow, emotionally strong, unconvincing, or difficult to follow. Chapter numbers are very helpful.
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Reader notes should identify where the current story works and where it breaks. The goal is not to rewrite the book into someone else's version.
Useful notes include pacing problems, unclear signal-log material, weak chapters, strong moments, confusing choices, and formatting/device issues.
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